Wednesday, February 17, 2016

Elevator Pitch 2

Durring this Assignment I was able to deliver key points regarding my product. Since this is my first attempt on submitting an elevator pitch I will try to be clear and to the point. Reflective to my experience I would tie my self more to the product.
I am looking forward to creating great improvement pendant to my feedback. I hope everyone enjoys GuacNola Bars!
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  1. UnknownFebruary 18, 2016 at 12:50 PM

    Great job!! Keep up the good work!

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  2. UnknownFebruary 18, 2016 at 9:41 PM

    Hi Jazmin,
    I thought you did a good job on your second elevator pitch. This is the first idea I've seen that is a food, it's really cool to see something different. I think the only thing that I would be concerned about is mixing guac with the granola bar, that seems a little odd and I'm not sure how many people would be open to trying that. Maybe you should try conducting some online poll. Other than that, good job! Take a look at my post when you have a chance:
    https://principlesofentrepreneurship.wordpress.com/2016/02/17/elevator-pitch-no-2/
    Good luck!

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  3. UnknownFebruary 21, 2016 at 4:51 PM

    Jazmin,

    I thought you did a good job it your video! It seemed well rehearsed and you didn't appear to be reading off of your notes. However, you may want to put a little more detail in your caption as far as what you changed and the feedback you got! That is really the only thing I noticed! Other than that good job!

    here is the link to my blog if you're interested:
    http://poecr.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html

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  4. Jennie CarmodyFebruary 22, 2016 at 10:39 PM

    Hi Jazmin!
    Great job on your pitch! You seemed professional and passionate about your product. I, personally, love guac! I'm not sure how I feel about guac in a bar, but I guess I would have to try it first to see. Overall it seems very creative and I love the "have a guac-tactic" day punchline. You may want to conduct some time of survey to see if consumers would be willing to try and buy your product. Great pitch! Here is mine if you would like to see http://jenniecarmody.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html

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  5. UnknownFebruary 24, 2016 at 10:36 PM

    I'm not sure if I understand, but are you trying to combine guacamole with a granola bar? I'm not sure how open people would be to that because it's kind of an odd mixture (being sweet and salty) so maybe ask around! Besides that note, my only other note would be to work on pauses. I think that you could have cut a quarter of the time you used off just by a continuous flow of speech, rather than the pauses you took. Also, maybe next time try to film in a quite area because there seemed to be a lot of background noise and it was hard to hear what you were saying at times, which might have added to confusion I had. By filming in a quite area and having a more connotes flow of speech, I think your elevator pitch could be perfect! Great first try though and keep up the good work! Check out my pitch on my blog
    http://ent3003max.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html

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